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Commission: Too Much of a Good Thing

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Alex adjusted his glasses as he saw the editing program was done downloading. His mouth went dry from excitement and nervousness. It sounded too good to be true but the reviews online said it worked, with some saying it worked "too well." Alex assumed that was just hyperbole.

It was a program that boasted being able to edit the person using it. Alex, deep down, wanted to change. He wanted to be like the dark elves in his fantasy books and video games. Uploading a photo of himself, Alex added in the purple skin, the smooth silver hair, the pointed ears. And, with a gulp of admission, changed his sex from male to female. Then he hit enter.

Alex stood up in shock as he felt the changes take hold. He looked down at his hands and saw his skin was now a rich, creamy violet. Alex moved these new purple hands over his...her waist and felt how it now curved in and gave way to modest hips. Alex only had on shorts and a tank top before using the program and now she could feel a modest bust filling out her top and new, soft genitals brushing against the shorts' athletic fabric. With a smile, Alex reached up and felt her ears, now delicate and pointed. Touching the tips sent a shiver down her spine. She bent down and looked at her reflection in the computer screen. Her vision was blurred; clearly she didn't need these glasses anymore. Removing the glasses, she saw she was a female elf version of the male Alex, with smoother skin on the face than before and slightly higher cheeks. Her pupils and irises were now a milky color, only slightly darker than her eyes' white sclera and giving off a very mysterious look. Speaking of white, Alex ran her hands through her soft, long, shining silver hair. It wasn't much longer than it was originally but it felt like Alex had just come out of a top salon.

She reveled in her new body, stroking her slim ears and fondling one of her breasts. This new elf body was not particularly voluptuous and Alex's new chest was much smaller than her own palms. Still, it was not as though Alex got a lot of chances to touch breasts before so any opportunity to caress a woman's body was exciting, even if it was now her own. Alex smiled and rubbed one thumb against her twitching nipple from over her tank top while the other hand pet her pointy ear. 

"It worked! I'm a woman and I'm a dark elf!" Alex said with glee. Her voice was slightly more feminine now and she spun on her heel, feeling her elvish body be more limber and fluid than it was when Alex was a human man. Still, even as she ran her hands down her slim thighs and felt her soft lap, Alex could not help but feel the novelty wear off fast. Alex was just a female, dark elf version of her male body. As a woman, she was...average, to be honest. There was nothing too appealing about just being a female elf version of Alex the young man.

"Let's see what improvements I can make," Alex smiled, taping on the computer. She saw a text bar over the program, boasting "Adaptive Memory," whatever that means. As Alex started typing, she added more curves to her body and upped the amount of elvishness. Then, Alex looked at her new body. If she was going to be a woman, she might as well go all out. Alex added in an edit to make herself pregnant.

"Adapting," the computer display read as Alex braced for the change.

Suddenly, Alex felt she was different. There was a new weight on her body and she felt incredibly full in her stomach. Sure enough, her belly had ballooned out in no time, making it as big as a basketball. Alex was nine months pregnant and she could even feel a fetus kicking around inside of her. The initial kicks made her gasp and wince – this baby was surprisingly strong – but she got used to it and bit her bottom lip. Her slender dark elf arms wrapped around her belly and held it close.

"It worked! I look so ripe and feel so gorgeous," Alex said, gasping at her voice. It had a songlike quality now as she was speaking like a real elf maiden. She shuddered as she admired her body. Alex was a truly sexy elf with breasts full of milk for her coming child and wide hips for birthing. She could feel her silver hair tickling the small of her back and then Alex realized her clothes had changed. Her tank top was replaced by a low cut top that hugged her pregnant belly like a second skin and allowed plenty of bare purple skin on her back. Around Alex's hips was a light, silky cloth that draped down one leg. 

One hand reached down under her pregnant stomach and exposed underbelly skin. It was sensitive to the touch, even more than her ears. Alex's thighs rubbed together as she pet her belly, her hand moving to clutch one breast. As a man, Alex had never felt boobs this big before! She cooed, the elvish choral quality still there in her voice. Alex wanted to see what waddling would be like but now that she was a dark elf, every step was meticulous and smooth, her bare feet tracing the carpet of the computer room. She could not help but preen, fully imbued with the cultural flavor of the dark elves she knew from her video games and fantasy books.

"This worked perfectly," Alex said a beautiful, soft voice. "I am so sexy and feel like a real elf maiden!" She touched the small necklace around her neck, hanging right above the start of her cleavage. "This is what I wanted to be like...but the dark elves I know are not just hot girls that flirt and pet themselves. They are powerful and evil and crafty. This is close to what I wanted to but not quite there yet."

Before Alex could do anything, the computer display changed on its own. "Adapting," it read. Alex caught this in her eye but it did not register until she felt another transformation take hold.

With a gasp, Alex stumbled back one step and admired what had just taken place. What had been Alex's clothes were all gone now. Instead, Alex was wearing a golden, metal bikini that was almost like battle armor. It was what the dark elf queen wore in his fantasy stories! It was a good thing the bikini was open and form fitting because Alex's breasts expanded out to E cups, adding some weight to her body.

As Alex lifted her hands to see her purple skin get richer, she also saw long, pearl-colored fingernails sticking out nice and long. One hand reached back to run through her sliver locks. Her hair now reached down to her plump, firm butt and was held in place with a golden tiara that rested on her pointed ears. Alex was not only a dark elf now, she was their evil and mighty queen and she felt the power coarse through her. Alex laughed, with diabolical bellows rolling out easily.

"Finally! Now this is more like it!" Alex said, easily sounding strong and commanding. She could make anyone, human or dark elf, male or female, follow her orders with ease. She grinned, feeling her lips now much fuller and her teeth slightly sharper.

Then Alex felt a kick and chuckled, not forgetting about her pregnancy. But as Alex reached down to pet her long fingernails over her maternal bump, she saw she was even bigger now. What had been a basketball was now a watermelon and it was totally out and bare thanks to her metallic and regal bikini outfit. Alex purred and stroked her huge, pregnant belly and could spot her belly button vanished in place of an adorable dimple. As Alex pet and fondled her pregnant stomach, she could feel a second body stirring inside of her. She popped her hip out and gave herself a good look at her pregnant body, following the long trace of its curve from her breasts to her waist to her stomach on down to her hips and thighs.

"Twins! That is just perfect!" Alex cackled, half expecting lighting to crash outside her window when she used this booming evil voice. "Two heirs to rule my domain after I am gone! I should have known I had this pregnancy fetish years ago!" She continued to pace around the room, now each waddle more like a militaristic stomp as Alex surveyed her room, which was her kingdom for now. The metal bikini was even smaller around her hips to make room for her hourglass hips and large, thick ass cheeks. Around her legs were golden, leather boots that stretched half way up her thighs and had a little heel to give her that extra air of strength and to give her booty more definition.

"God, this body is amazing! I look sexy and I feel sexy! It would be all too easy to go out and rope me a young hottie for the night," Alex purred, feeling her power and evil drip into each word. Being dominating came naturally to her now and she had no second thoughts about what she had done to herself. Alex strode back toward the computer and tossed her hands through her long silver hair, a wide smile on her plump lips. "Now all that is left for me is to decide how I go and use this goddess-like body to go and have sex with some future servants and subjects. I did not anticipate being pregnant would make me as horny as it is now! Sex is all I can think about! And I love that part of the new me! I have this drop dead gorgeous body, why not have fun with it?!"

The computer made a sound again and displayed its message. "Adapting," it said. For the first time, Alex's gleeful smile fell away and she looked at the computer confused. What was left after this?

Alex got her answer as she cried out in shock. Her wide butt filled her office chair as she fell back down into it. Alex looked down at her pregnant belly and saw why. Once again, she had doubled in size and the extra weight knocked her down onto her ass. Now, as Alex sat down, her belly stuck all the way out to her knees. Alex moaned as a shudder went through her entire body. She thought she was horny before but now she was positively starving for sex.

"What happened this time?" Alex moaned, petting her stomach and feeling four unborn babies now struggling and kicking around inside of her womb. The size of her enormous pregnancy belly forced Alex's legs wide and she saw she was no longer wearing the armored bikini of a dark elf queen. Instead, she had on yellow leggings that were pulled so tight over her thick thighs and fat ass that they were practically see-through. Instead of a bikini keeping her breasts in place, she had a loose tube top. It had to be loose since Alex now had breasts that were twice as big as her palms.

"I look like a hooker!" Alex said, her voice losing its evil, slick tone. Now, she sounded breathy and flirtatious, unable to talk any other way. "Or a stripper. I'll bet lots of guys would love to see these big cheeks swivel on a greased up pole while my boobs hang down low...what am I saying?!"

Alex's hands went to her head in panic and she felt her long silver hair now tied in a ponytail. Large, gleaming hoop earrings were in each of her pointed ears. As she ran her hands over her body, she saw her long fingernails were now painted hot pink and there were bracelets all over her arms. With a groan, she caressed her body and each little touch sent electric sparks throughout her sensitive new form. "Horny" was not the word for what she was. Alex felt like an absolute slut and looked the part, despite her dark elf features still there as her purple skin glowed from pregnancy hormones.

With a moan, Alex turned in her office chair. Her pregnant body was too heavy for her to stand up just yet and she had a hard time getting a grip in the floor with her new stiletto heels. But she knew, the moment she could stand and waddle, she would go outside and start having sex. She would flag down any guy or gal she could that made her heart flutter and offer them a quickie for cheap. Maybe even give it away for free!

Alex then saw she had one hand in between her legs and one pinching at her swollen nipples. This pregnant slutty stuff was fun, sure, but now it was getting out of control. "I just want it so bad," Alex moaned, her voice dripping with sex. "I want to be adored and touched but I think this is way too much now! I have to get back to where I was at first..." 

Even sliding in her seat and feeling her wet lap rub against the office chair made Alex cry out in bliss. But her hands went to the keyboard to exit the editing program, just as the computer screen read "Adapting."

"No, no more!" Alex whined. "I know I want it but...I don't know if I can handle much more!"

She did not exit out of the program quickly enough. Alex threw her head back as she groaned, with her pregnant stomach swelling like a balloon. She felt her body growing fast and the office chair creaked under her weight. Her ass cheeks got thicker and fuller, only stopped by the confines of her seat. Alex reached her hands up to hold onto her breasts. She no longer had a top on and instead had two breasts as big as her pregnant belly was with quadruplets

Finally, Alex opened her eyes and took at look at her new body. A third of Alex's entire body was just her pregnant stomach and it forced her legs wide apart. As long as Alex was sitting down, she was not going to be able to bring her knees any closer together. She was an octomom now with eight unborn dark elf babies swimming around inside her tightly packed womb. Where Alex had a small dimpled belly button before, she had a popped out navel the size of a door knob. She felt so tight and sore across her belly skin but each ginger stroke of her fingers across the surface made her moan and bite her lips.

Both of her naked breasts had to hang down on each side of her maternal middle. Each areola was swollen to the side of a saucer and had large golden rings piercing her erect nipples, which sent a constant stream of arousing sensations through her tits. Alex felt her bare lap rubbing against her chair, soaking it thoroughly. The only clothes Alex had on, aside from some ridiculous high heels, were leather belts winding around her breasts and shoulders like she was a bondage model.

"I am enormous!" Alex whimpered, her voice as sultry and high pitched as a porn actress right before she has to cum. "Oh god, is all of this belly mine?" She pet her long fingernails over her belly again, with her huge, juicy lips puckering out on instinct. Alex squirmed in her seat as best she could as she looked at her pregnant body, with a mix of admiration and fear. "What am I going to do?"

As Alex thought about her current situation, her hands went behind her head and she struck a pose like a pin-up girl. Even all alone, Alex was still so slutty she had to try and look at hot as possible. Her silver hair was at its longest, tied into a tight braid that made it down past her ass cheeks. If Alex had seen what was now reflected in her computer screen less than an hour ago, it would be the only thing he would ever masturbate to. 

"Oh no, what have I done to myself?" Alex whined again, pouting her big lips and pushing her naked breasts together with her arms to make them look even bigger. Her delicate pointed ears burned red as she turned herself on. If she had a high sex drive when she was dressed like a hooker, Alex was a total sex addict now and needed a fix soon. "I look so good and feel so amazing! I'm an absolute sex goddess! I didn't want to be an evil dark elf queen, I just liked how hot everyone thought the queen was! I wanted to be this total sex pot! But what am I going to do with my life now?"

Slowly, Alex pushed herself out of her office chair and waddled forward. Her hips, three times as wide as her waist was (if she wasn't pregnant), had to be pushed out far to compensate for the weight of her belly. Alex's two heaving breasts jiggled and pushed against her taut pregnant stomach as she moved. Thankfully, her big ass made for a nice rudder to help her move around.

Now that Alex felt confident she could move, the first thought on her mind was going outside and finding someone to have sex with her. She bit her bottom lip again and started to pet her pregnant belly faster and faster. "I feel so horny, like an absolute perverted fetish come to life, but do I really want to be like this forever?" Alex looked over her shoulder at her computer and considered turning the program back on to change into her original self and put this all behind her.

But a strong fetal kick made Alex take one more step toward the door and a little smile crept across her plump lips. "Well, I can't be the only person who downloaded that program. I should at least go out and see what kinds of fantasy creations are out there." And with a wiggle of her hips, Alex was out the door and ready to show off her new body and personality to the entire world.
Alex finds a program that can edit and change his body to his liking. But little does he know, the program knows Alex better than he knows himself and makes some changes of its own.

Commissioned by jwargod based on art also commissioned from Olympic-Dames 
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sweetladyamy's avatar
Wow....

Speechless.